Wrote it from personal experience in my garden, about 10 years ago.
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Another badly written one
Disconnected
Lying in your arms
Our bodies intertwined
Split between then and now
As one, but not completely whole
Our love is built on memories
Shadows from the past
The ones we were
Are long gone now
We were different people then
Silence moves around the room
It echoes in our souls
Distant laughter fills the night
Tears splash on the ground
Time stands still yet marches on
Days become endless weeks
Eternity stretches like a rubber band
Precariously thin
Disconnection with the mind
Separation from the skin
Parts in conflict, struggling
Existing in one space
The road ahead is cloudy
Tension fills the air
Temptations lurk, unseen
Disconnected from life
Living in our dreams
Disconnected
Lying in your arms
Our bodies intertwined
Split between then and now
As one, but not completely whole
Our love is built on memories
Shadows from the past
The ones we were
Are long gone now
We were different people then
Silence moves around the room
It echoes in our souls
Distant laughter fills the night
Tears splash on the ground
Time stands still yet marches on
Days become endless weeks
Eternity stretches like a rubber band
Precariously thin
Disconnection with the mind
Separation from the skin
Parts in conflict, struggling
Existing in one space
The road ahead is cloudy
Tension fills the air
Temptations lurk, unseen
Disconnected from life
Living in our dreams
Nicholas
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Better than having no words at all - work roughly crafted can still be refined.
Nicholas
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Have you ever started writing something - as though the first two sentences [for example] had popped in existence inside your mind - then found yourself unable to continue?
Many times
But there are times I can spew pages of utter crap too.
Nicholas
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Most of the time I just write. But I use paper and pen. I find it feels better.
I will usually see it in my head - but I recently wrote something while I was sitting in the semidark. And I had no idea what was going to be written - I just wrote. It isn't good - but it felt good writing it.
Nicholas
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Not sure anyone would want to pay money for my story - but thanks. I will watch it
Nicholas
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Oh, I am not saying that you should set up a paywall, just that it may um......I'm at a loss for words.
Nicholas
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Do you ever revisit said dross and try to rewrite it?
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OnlyFans...Oh, I am not saying that you should set up a paywall, just that it may um......I'm at a loss for words.
That is really lovely
Oh I thought you meant I should finish and publish my book. OoopsOh, I am not saying that you should set up a paywall, just that it may um......I'm at a loss for words.
Nicholas
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OnlyFans for writing? I wonder whether anyone else has done that yet, and whether people would pay for that sort of content on OnlyFans?
Nicholas
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I'm not sure what my intention was any more. I don't have words to explain myself. Maybe it would have made more sense if I had linked to specific video clips?
That would have made it clearer